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SurNaTal
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Posted on 08-19-07 2:56
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एउटा कबिता
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Veg Tiger
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Posted on 08-19-07 3:51
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SurNaTal
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Posted on 08-20-07 12:07
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Nepal ko chora
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Posted on 08-20-07 12:13
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Ramro kabita chha, surnatal ji. Aru pani lekhdai garnus.
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ritthe
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Posted on 08-20-07 1:08
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Dalli Resham
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Posted on 08-20-07 10:37
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Surnaal l ko manchhe le kasto ramro ra man chhune kavita lekheko. Aru pani lekhdai garam hai. Very good and touching!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Rahuldai
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Posted on 08-20-07 10:55
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सुन्तले, यस्तो पो कबिता लेख्नु, आफुले त सधैं सबिता लेख्ने गरेको रहेछु। मनै छुने मात्रा होइन मन मा गढ्ने भावको बहाव हो तपाईंको कबिता।
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Nauloparibesh
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Posted on 08-20-07 12:03
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Dukha gara sathi, timro bhabishya dhekincha yo kabita bata.
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Birkhe_Maila
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Posted on 08-20-07 12:28
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गजबको शैलि लाग्यो सुर न ताल जी! अरु प नि जावस!
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SurNaTal
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Posted on 08-20-07 1:10
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नेप्चे, so great of you, हौसाला को लागि धन्यबाद्। रिठ्ठे दाई सधुबाद्। Dilli Resham जी, सुर् मिलाउन खोज्दा खोज्दा नी नसक्ने बनि भएर नै नाम् सुरनताल् हुन गा हो, तपाईँलाई सुर् ताल् मिलेको लागेछ, धन्यबाद्, हौसला सच्चिकै सिरोपर्य छ। प्रयास् जरि राख्नेछु, राहुल् दाई, मन् पराइदिनु भएकोमा र यत्तिका उत्प्रेरणा र हौसल्लाका लागि धेरै नै आभरी छु। लेख्ने रहर् हो, तर खास् ग्यान् केहि छैन, बस्, तेत्ति भन्छु, मेरो नामै सुरनताल। Nauloparibesh जि, परिबेश् मलाई नि नौलो नै लागेको छ र यस्मा दुख गर्ने प्रण त छदैछ। धन्यबाद् मन् पराईदिनु भएकोमा। बिर्खे दाई, सैली मन् पराईदिनु भयो, म दंग परेँ, हौसला मिल्यो, केहि पुराना र केहि नयाँ प्रयास हरु पस्कने जमरोको गर्ने छु। सझा बासी हरु, जस्जस्ले मेरा posting पढ्नु भएर हौसला दिनु भएको छ, सबैलाई हार्दिक् क्रितज्ञता ब्यक्त गर्दछु।
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Deep
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Posted on 08-20-07 1:19
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घच्चिको छ है --- सुन्तली माघे घाममा ज्यान तताउन कौसीमा आउँदा आफुलाई न्यानो भा झैं भो -- तर के -- शहरमा हामी छम नी --तेसरी बत्ति झ्याप झुप हुन्छ भनेर नभडकाम न आम्ने लाई -- उता गाम बेसी गर्दा गर्दै कामरेड ले लगेर अस्थाई शिबीरमा भर्ना गर्द्यो भने? मारेन?
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Nepe
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Posted on 08-20-07 1:49
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My quick observation: A little bit lopsided but very powerful ! Enjoyed reading it.
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shirish
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Posted on 08-20-07 2:21
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A different approach. Well done !!
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urfrenrites
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Posted on 08-20-07 3:11
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KHATARA CHITTHI RAICHA "GAUNKO SOLITINILAI", RAMRO LAGYO. Tara mero bicharma saharma pani solitini hunchan hola ni. yeso uhalai pani lekahu na. Deep Ji, kasto ramro rational din bhayeko.
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Gautam B.
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Posted on 08-20-07 10:16
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राम्रो छ बेसूरे! क्या सशक्त भाव संप्रेषण भएको छ! अब छूच्चो पनि हुनुप-यो। लामा-लामा हरफहरु बिझाउँछन् के ठाउँ-ठाउँमा! ब्रोले एक बसाईमै लेखेर टाँसिहालेको हो जस्तो छ। धैर्य गरेर एक राऊण्ड काँटछाँट गरेको भए अझ दा----मी बन्थ्यो कि?! तर अहिले पनि दामी नभएको भने होईन्। बयान गर्दा शब्द घटाउन सकिन्छ। जस्तो "स्वयम्भुका न्यायिक आँखाहरु--" मा 'न्यायिक' अनाबश्यक छ, "स्वयम्भुका आँखाहरु--" मात्रै काफी छ, न्यायको भाव दिन। अनि अर्को कुरो, अचेल गाममै पनि सोल्टिनीहरु खासै सुरक्षित छैनन्। कि कसो?!
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vata-ta-ta
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Posted on 08-20-07 10:42
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dami chha, good one ramro samajik chitran chha, sabdawali lai yes vanda badi dhani banauna sake ta yesle mutu haina brain nai chhunchha.
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SurNaTal
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Posted on 08-20-07 11:50
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दीप् दाई, गज्जब् को अनुभूति, मेरै मनको कुरा गर्नु भा झैँ। पुरानै मानसिकतामा लेखेँ हुंला, कत्ति कुराहरु, माफ् पाम्। नेपे गुरु, I have been admiring what you have created in these sajha threads, you are the real guru. Now, I understand why you may feel it lopsided. Perhaps, I could not open my horizon of thoughts as wide as I should have. I keep following your suggestions. सिरिश दाई, I am not that good in writting. Just want to say that you are awesome writter and it is my great pleasure to have you read this thread and make comments. URFRENRITES ji, my pleasure. Perhaps I may not have enough experience of Nepali town life, I mean, to the extent that triggers me to write good. Yet, I may try. गोताएं दाई, तपाईंका सुझाबहरु अतिनै गहकिला र समसामयिक छन्। म क्रितज्ञ छु। सुधारको हरपल प्रयास् रहनेछ। भ-ट-ट-ट जि, धेरै धेरै धन्यबाद्, मन पराईदिनु भएकोमा। राम्रो भन्नु भो, मेरो चुरो पक्डनु भो। अरु प्रयासरुमा सुधार गर्ने जमर्को गर्ने छु। तारेमाम्
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