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Posted on 12-08-04 10:33 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nocturnal Mess
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In this savage darkness
I confine myself.
And dream of breaking the walls
I built around me.

Follow the lead of the night,
and sing the grasshoppers' tunes.
Loneliness teaches you wisdom
like no lover can.

I speak in rhymes.
Every word I write is a poem.

Beautiful are the bright lights
that shine from the town below.
And sad the lone moon
when stars hide under the winter clouds.

I mark time by minutes,
Hours are too long.

I sing loneliness its due praise
even if my mouth turns sour.
Feelings cohort to rebel and resurface again.
They must have suspected vulnerability.

But I am a cool cat,
And when I holler you pay attention.
I too, rap to my own grooves.

Below my bed is a lone mouse,
but I will not extent my hand to him.
A human prejudice!
When he clamps and runs and cries, I bear witness.
And decide not to run him down.

Trenches are deep between people
who school their thoughts.
I admit I will never be not lonely,
if every day I drowse, every night I fret.

But I speak in rhymes.
Every word I write is a poem.

I am a cool cat,
And when I holler you pay attention.
I too, rap my own grooves.

I am Keats reincarnated.
I replace all the "I"s in Whitman,
And celebrate my own, my lone, grandiosity.

Sacrifice your disbelief,
suspend your suspicion...
Hand me a racquet, I am Agassi.
When I turnaround and jump, I am KG.

I sport fresh fires.
I pluck pearls from seas unknown.
I would only wear Armani, even if I was a Gandhi.

I change people.
I too, mingle with multitudes.
I date Paltrow and diss J.Lo.
When I talk to Daly,
he thinks like Donahue.

Ignore me at your own peril.
Short attention span; I will forget you.
I too, create my own melody.

You cannot fathom me: I am bottomless.
Don't gauze me, I am limitless.
I own Mastercard(r), I am priceless.

Armstrong found me hibernating in the moon.
Read between his blurbs: step, leap, mankind...
That is me!

I speak in rhymes.
Every word I write is a poem.

Now the night is nearly over,
The lamppost is lighting the fresh snow.
I will drowse now, but they will have a bad, bad day.

By the way,
When I see snow, I feel bad for Neapolean.
If I were him, I would have bought those thick Eddie Bauer parkas
And marched my men through the length and breadth of Russia.

______
mG.
 
Posted on 12-08-04 1:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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AWESOME MG

i see the snow but i'll not falter
and i'll fly on wings of dreams
weighed down by last night's snow
blizzards i'll cross
i'm alone
but i'll never be lonely

 
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Posted on 12-08-04 11:42 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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mindgames: Once again I am in love with your writing.
 
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Posted on 12-09-04 10:58 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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mg wrote-

Follow the lead of the night,
and sing the grasshoppers' tunes.
Loneliness teaches you wisdom
like no lover can.

Trenches are deep between people
who school their thoughts.
I admit I will never be not lonely,
if every day I drowse, every night I fret.


all i can write is- amazing!
but my favorite is-

I am Keats reincarnated.
I replace all the "I"s in Whitman,
And celebrate my own, my lone, grandiosity.

actually, mg, when i saw the title of this thread, nocturnal mess, i said to myself, "awesome! i bet mg posted more poems!" i just knew....as always, thanks for sharing.


 
Posted on 12-09-04 11:05 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Bravo!!!!Why can't more people post something like this instead of posting garbage?
 
Posted on 12-09-04 11:25 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Bravo MG! Keep going :)........nocturnal mess it is these days!
 
Posted on 12-09-04 11:29 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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OMG! I can see a poet emerging!! :)
 
Posted on 12-09-04 12:07 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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He has been a poet for a long time.
 
Posted on 12-09-04 12:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Yes. But with his creativity, he can be ranked among the ones he has written about in the above poem. Very high regard for absolute creativity like his!

MG, have you tried poetry.com? Dont mean to underestimate your qualities in any way; it hosts poetry awards- give your creativity a wider exposure.
 
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MG,
Extremely nice peom. I think this is the first time I am reading your poem and giving any remarks. Yes, like DC_Girl suggested, you should try www.poetry.com. You might get featured there. It's very quality poem. MG sounds like Robert Frost?;)
 
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heartfelt gratitude to each one of you for your kind remarks.
thanks,
mG.
 
Posted on 12-09-04 10:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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yes we need more post like this
intellectual and what not
i lost words; final exam week does this
mind filled with polyethylene glycol
10% MEM, hybridoma antigenes
i drag my poetry like logarithmic growth curve of avian heart cell in vitro
dead but alive on essential medium
pulsing as if calling me to
i'll turn off the lights now
we'll change the media tomorrow

 
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Quotes from Leaving Cert Essays:

She walked into my office like a centipede with 98 missing legs.

His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and breaking alliances
like underpants in a tumble dryer

Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair after a sneeze.

The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a
bowling ball wouldn't.

McMurphy fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a paper bag
filled with vegetable soup.

Her eyes were like two brown circles with big black dots in the centre

The dandelion swayed in the gentle breeze like an oscillating electric fan
set on medium.

Her vocabulary was as bad as, kinda' like, sorta, whatever.

He was as tall as a six-foot-three-inch tree.

The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just like maggots when you
fry them in hot grease

Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed lovers raced across
the grassy field toward each other like two freight trains, one
having left Ballina at 6:36 pm travelling at 55 mph, the other from
Claremorris 4:19pm at a speed of 35 mph.

The politician was gone but unnoticed, like the full stop after the
Dr. on a Dr Pepper can.

John and Mary had never met. They were like two hummingbirds who
had also never met.

The thunder was ominous sounding, much like the sound of a thin sheet
of metal being shaken backstage during the storm scene in a play.

The red brick wall was the colour of a brick-red crayon.

Even in his last years, Granddad had a mind like a steel trap, only
one that had been left out so long it had rusted shut.

Shots rang out, as shots are wont to do.

The plan was simple, like my brother Phil. But unlike Phil, this
plan just might work.

The young fighter had a hungry look, the kind you get from not eating
for while.

"Oh, Jason, take me!" she panted, her bre@$ts heaving like a
student on 50 cent-a-pint night.

He was as lame as a duck. Not the metaphorical lame duck either,
but a real duck that was actually lame. Maybe from stepping on a land
mine or something.

Her artistic sense was exquisitely refined, like someone who can
tell butter from the "I Can't Believe It's Not Butter" ad.

She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that sound a dog makes
just before it throws up.

It came down the stairs looking very much like something no one had
ever seen before.

The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and extended one slender
leg behind her, like a dog at a lamppost.

The revelation that his marriage of 30 years had disintegrated
because of his wife's infidelity came as a rude shock, like a
surcharge at a formerly surcharge-free cashpoint.

It was a working class tradition, like fathers chasing kids around
with their power tools.

He was deeply in love. When she spoke, he thought he heard
bells, as if she were a dustcart reversing.

She was as easy as the Independent crossword.

She grew on him like she was a colony of E. coli and he was
room-temperature British beef.

Her voice had that tense, grating quality, like a first-generation
thermal paper fax machine that needed a band tightened. It hurt the
way your tongue hurts after you accidentally staple it to the wall.

Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had its two other
sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.


 
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Since no one is writing any good stuff me included i'll just post one by charles bukowski
NIGHT SCHOOL
from Dangling In the Tournefortia

in the drunk driver's class
assigned there by division 63
we are given tiny yellow pencils
to take a test
to see if we have been listening
to the instructor.
questions like: the minimum sentence for a
2nd drunk driving conviction is:
a) 48 days
b) 6 months
c) 90 days
there are 9 others questions.
after the instructor leaves the room
the students begin asking the questions:
"hey, how about question 5? that's a
tough one!"
"did he talk about that?"
"I think its 48 days."
"are you sure?"
"no, but that's what I'm putting
down."
one women circles all 3 answers
on all questions
even though we've been told to
select only one.

on our break I go down and
drink a can of beer
outside a liquor store.
I watch a black hooker
on her evening stroll.
a car pulls up.
she walks over and they
talk.
the door opens.
she gets in and
they drive off.

back in class
the students have gotten
to know each other.
they are a not-very-interesting
bunch of drunks.
I visualize them sitting in a
bar
and i remember why
I started drinking
alone.

the class begins again.
it is discovered that I am
the only one to have gotten
100 percent on the test.

I slouch back in my chair
with my dark shades on.
I am the class
intellectual.
charles bukowski
 
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खै के के ---
 
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Bukowski - Modest Mouse
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Woke up this morning and it seemed to me, that every night turns out to be a little bit more like Bukowski. And yeah, I know he's a pretty good read. But God who'd wanna be? God who'd wanna be such an asshole? God who'd wanna be? God who'd wanna be such an asshole?

Well we sat on the edge of the river, the crowd screamed "Sacrifice the liver!" If God takes life, he's an Indian giver. So tell me now why you'll never tell me never. Who would wanna be? Who would wanna be such a control freak? Well who would wanna be? Who would wanna be such a control freak?

Well see what you wanna see. You should see it all.
Well take what you want from me. You deserve it all.
Nine times out of ten, our heart just gets dissolved.
Well I want a better place or just a better way to fall.
But one time out of ten, everything is perfect for us all.
Well I want a better place or just a better way to fall.

Here we go!
If God controls the land and disease, and keeps a watchful eye on me, if he's really so damn mighty, well my problem is that I can't see, well who'd wanna be? Who'd wanna be such a control freak? Well who would wanna be? Who would wanna be such a control freak?

Evil home stereo, what GOOD songs do you know?
Evil me, oh yeah I know, what good curves can you throw?
Well all that icing and all that cake, I can't make it to your wedding, but I'm sure I'll be at your wake. You were talk, talk, talk, talkin' in circles that day, when you get to the point make sure that I'm still awake, OK?

Went to bed and didn't see why every day turns out to be a little bit more like Bukowski. And yeah, I know he's a pretty good read. But God who'd wanna be? God who'd wanna be such an asshole?

***


bhattu, i got the modest mouse CD about 2 months ago and i was listening to them for a while there. i was glad to see they were a fan of Bukowski too!

mG.
 
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MG after reading modest mouse i downloaded the whole album ( bittorrent rocks !!!) and it is pretty awesome modest mouse i mean . kinda reminded me of tom waits. actually u should chek tom waits out his writing has been compared to that of Bukowski..
here is one

9TH & HENNEPIN
tom waits, rain dogs

Well it's 9th and Hennepin
And all the donuts have
Names that sound like prostitutes
And the moon's teeth marks are
On the sky like a tarp thrown over all this
And the broken umbrellas like
Dead birds and the steam
Comes out of the grill like
The whole goddamned town is ready to blow.
And the bricks are all scarred with jailhouse tattoos
And everyone is behaving like dogs.
And the horses are coming down Violin Road
And Dutch is dead on his feet
And the rooms all smell like diesel
And you take on the
Dreams of the ones who have slept here.
And I'm lost in the window
I hide on the stairway
I hang in the curtain
I sleep in your hat
And no one brings anything
Small into a bar around here.
They all started out with bad directions
And the girls behind the counter has a tattooed tear,
One for every year he's away she said, such
A crumbling beauty, but there's
Nothing wrong with her that
$100 won't fix, she has that razor sadness
That only gets worse
With the clang and the thunder of the
Southern Pacific going by
As the clock ticks out like a dripping faucet
Till you're full of rag water and bitters and blue ruin
And you spill out
Over the side to anyone who'll listen
And I've seen it
All through the yellow windows
Of the evening train.
 


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