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Posted on 12-02-04 6:17 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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november

frosted cheerios
frosted strawberry pop tart
breakfast with pakako tea
frosted morning outside my window
i dream of you
from my warm bed
 
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Posted on 12-02-04 6:30 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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december

a river flows near my house
winding through mankato avenue
washing off the color from the leaves
dirt , pavement, pilgrim's feet,
there's another one
lives next street from me
frozen this time of the year

p.s i could never distinguish between a river and a sea till today ......
 
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bhattu, nice poems. winter ko samjhana dekhyidiyo sathi le... btw i am spared of frost this year. so far. but it's just december.

your "November" is great! and nice picture too...

mG.
 
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हाइकु फुर्ला जस्तो मेरो त।

मेरो छाप्रोको छेऊ
कलकल् नदि झेँ बग्ने
शितको बिन्दु !
 
Posted on 12-03-04 11:51 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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my moist janai wets my body hours after shower
making me fell holy and home

under 4 layers of sweatshirts
my body glistened
as if ready for one more sin
bhattu
 
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the exhaust fan in my bathroom sounds much like the coughing sound of a dying old man in a hospital bed.
 
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spiderman,
"my moist janai wets my body hours after shower
making me feel holy and home"

this is the best image/feeling of poetry i have read in a long time.
myan! that is cool...

s.
 
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maile ta janai fukalera phaleko bhayo bro 6 barsa.........

anyway nice poem
 
Posted on 12-04-04 1:22 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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MM Brole janai faleko 6 barsha matra bhayechha.
Maile gayatri mantra birseko 12 barsha bhayo.

I would like to review it once:
ओम् भु भुर्वस्व तत्सयवतुर्यमणम धिमयी प्रचोदायात!

मेरो नयाँ कविता निम्न बमोजिम छ:
शिर्षक: कारण

पानी पर्यो
बटुवाको टुप्पी भिजेन
कारण
बटुवा mG Bro थियो, टुप्पी नै थिएन।
 
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hello moneyminded and Dada giri Tapai haru le janai falera ke garnu bho bro haru aafno sanskriti ta bhulbnu bhayena ni aadhunik yug ma pani.
 


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