Was getting into it and beginning to enjoy my read until the "to be cntd" part),  However, felt it was too long but nevrtheless, was worth the time spent  Hope to read the finale soon.  Also, having followed your works since you first started posting, the research you've done for the stories is worthy of commendation and you somehow make me feel that it was you (your life events) in most of them. 

BTW, am loving the part of the palay's (chankhay) line "Yo nani ta khacchar po recha. Kasto mitho nepali boldo raicha ho.”  For some unknown reason it just cracked me up.  Have a nice wkend!!

Amber - Good going. The bold tone of the narration made it all the more interesting. I liked how you were unafraid to write about female sexuality and the somewhat sticky issue of sex with cousins (if I understood the relationship between Keshya and Awani correctly). I am sure you have already rasied quite a few eyebrows and I can only say it takes a certain amount of talent to knit a thorny subject like that into a story. Best wishes. CH

PS: Please don't delete this one

hahaha...
PDA is more commonplace in europe than in US innit? much to the likeness of who-cares-about-the-world couples , i suppose...

thought i would comment once you complete the story but couldn't resist to say: you got a promising start there. as Captain mentioned, it's a bold topic and narrating it with the ease that you did certainly demands talent. i knew you had it...

marrying with non-immediate family members is another utterly weird practice that still exists in some of the communities of our society. it's a sensitive issue and i applause your boldness and effort to narrate a topic of such sensitiveness.  i guess and i hope it's more than just a romantic love story...

good luck for the rest of the story. i am hoping for an exciting finish. hope you're coming soon.

Perfect blend of dialogues and narration. Especially I liked the insertion of nepali dialogues and the attitude of the characters.

Looking for the next part.

Good job !

I don't have time to read it .

reminds me of the czarian, victorian and british empire and all that genetic disorder. (O:

very carefully orchestrated plot full of sentiments and hormonal disorder. he he he (O:

my favorite portions:
                   1. ” Yo nani ta khacchar po recha. Kasto mitho nepali boldo raicha ho.”
                   2. " Mero ni yestai dress cha.”
                   3. “Mamu, Keshya is like Bhusya Kukur re. Once she will grow up she will be really ugly .”

and many more.

keep it  coming "amber".

will you be kind enuff to post the remaining portion of this one and the other one too.... (O: the fairy tale i missed

Blessed be us Amber, as sajha is in some form of intellectual recess, you came up with yet another thought provoking plot. We need more form you and other sajha geniuses. BTW please repost your fairy tale again. Sajha ** Returnee**

Was a wonderful read.. was disappointed at the "to be continued". Am eagerly waiting to read more. Please write soon.

excuse my intrusion but just wanted to say a quick hi to thapap who was MIA in sajha for a while.

hey thapapee... long tyam! how is it hanging? hahaha

amber,
i need ransom now that i have resurrected your thread from dead .

Hmm.. No more?

samsara/captain haddock/lootekukur/ returnee/thapap/bhakunde bhoot/aviator/rythm- thanks!
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wat's wrong with the editor?cannot format my text.

Narration is great.

finally, it's working.
thanks deep.

read the whole story today...was worth reading
good job amber...
keep these ideas flowing...

Good job Amber,

enjoyed reading it...

"There comes a time when one must force oneself to realize that what was once a goal is no longer. It isn’t for our lack of trying, it isn’t for our lack of dedication, but simply because destiny choose it for us. It is no longer a question of May if or when, but can or can’t.” Adaptablity governs our lives as circumstances change with time. Absolutely delightful thought Amber. You nailed it again! Keep it up ** returnee** Grrrrrrrrr.. this txt box :S

Really loved it Amber..specially the second half. It's amazing feeling  your baby move inside you, ain't it? Your narration made it feel so real..great going !!

wowwwwwwwwwww awesome