I was in the flight of fantasy
and i flew very high
I was happy to rise above
the ground was so dry

i dreamt and imagined
saw everything beautiful
There was no sorrow and
my heart was cheerful

I love this flight
and enjoyed the rollercoster
My life was nothing but
a colorful poster

But suddenly my fate came
and pushed me down
from the flight of fantasy
to the factual hard ground

It opened my eyes and
I realised my mistake
I was finding truth
in things which were fake

But there is no use of complaning
so my heart stopped to scream
After all how can i forget that
I HAD NO RIGHT TO DREAM :(:(...... UHUUUUUHUU

gg
tragedy

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn girl,u are deep......forgive me if i was unaware of such great talent around Sajha...i jus read a few of ur other poems and they were fantastic. Have u had any of ur poems published?????I'd luv to read more.......

thankx a lot.... sure i will post some more for u guys... :):)

Girly jeeeeeeeeeeeee, rumal chahincha bhane bhannus hai. Ma sanga extra cha. Ma ta gairly jee ko kavita pad da pad da aafai nai kavi bhako jsato anubhav garna thali sake.

"It opened my eyes and
I realised my mistake
I was finding truth
in things which were fake" girly gurl

Girly, this says a lot about human expectations and disappointments. Well expressed!

i have gone through lotsa bad and good things in life ... and that helped me write that poem n stanza i guess....

sad one but effective one..
u really are great poet:)
darshan dinu la kahile kahi hehe...
u are poem are so chweet.

i aint a gr8 poem as william shakespear ...am i??????? i dont even think i m a poet cuz i dont write poems evryday every night .... i feel like i m writing a jornal about me ,about wats happining , what i see....

oops i forgot to thank you... thankx a lot for saying that i m gr8 poem hehe... well if u guys r enjoying my poems then i willl wirte some more for ya...

ya sure then i will copy it in my personal diary
hehe
just kidding
keep on writing great work..
i feel so scared to write my peom.....kasaile chordihalyo bhane;)

hahaha common .......... i am tired of reading my own poems... lemme give a change to read ur poems.. ani k ko daar aru ley chorey choros timi lai tha cha kya rey timi ley lekhey ko ho tyo poem and no can change that truth.......... hoinata??????

nahhhh ...........
abhuiii dar lagcha nii mero taystoo kala ho ki k bhancha nii sahitya hola...choryo bhane mero mehenat khera gayenaa;)anyway ..hehe
herum lekheko ta chu tara saba yaha ek se ek poet haru cha ani
bichara mero kasle hercha:(sob sob haha...paachi post gardai garum la ni kunnai ramro lagihalyo bhanee.

thanks anyway.............................keep on writing ......i love to read ur poem....

Nope gurly, u ain't as great as "W. shakespeare", but surely are on ur way.
After all, my PRIVATE coaching is producing results :p Ahem .. ahem... :)

And whoever said, Poets write poems day n night. Itsnot the uqantity baby, its Da Quality ( timro poetry ko )
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"Ya sure then i will copy it in my personal diary .....................
........................i feel so scared to write my peom.....kasaile chordihalyo bhane;) "
-------------> The last sentence;Exactly my thoughts :).and sentences like the first one, doesn't help;)

Ma chordinaaa, ma ma suttukaa lekha ruina ;)
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And Gurly, your poems are nice, keep on posting. :), I would be proud to mention ur name with the likes of "W.S". A Nepali gurly, as good or even better that "W>S". Ahhhhhhhh now that would be the day.;)

Drooling,
IndisGuise:)

indisguise hmmmm
very clever hai???
maa chahi timima bhaye bhar ko poem lekhne timi jadai girly_girl lai private coach garne:(
k ho ha??
sob sb....noone ever hurt me like this:(
no wonder why i felt this poem so good..afterall it was written by meh!!!!!

Solly Ruina... but sob sob???? Shame shame.. roko?/// I know u would deny... saying my name is Ru-Ina... RoYEE NA.

Want some private coaching too ;)... pleasure would be all mine. JK.
By the way which poem r ya talking about?

Ever wondered why ppl tend to write about pain so often? A broken dream, broken heart, etc . Hmmmmmmmm I have concluded,
pain is necessary, without pain, poetry is a distant imagination;
Pained memories snarl in my mind,............. perhaps now i cud write some of my own.. after AGES.

IndisGuise:)

i m not talking to yaa...katti:(

Lau Jaaaaaaaaa :(

Hehe... Aba yesto bela ke bhannu parcha koi janne bujne sathi bhai le sikaunu bhaye abhari hunthe:p

Bhanana ruina...Which poen r ya talkin abt.

Lau... Lolipop:P vanilla flavor... jiskeko po lati.. la bhana aba;)

( Passes a bos of tissue to Ruina and open lolipop for her)
IndisGuise:)

dhat kasto timili ta fakaunu pani aundaina...:)
bhayo runaa bekar ma...time waste hehe...
i dont need lolipop.......kind of dieting no sweet!!!
i dont need tissue..its late sab hath le puchesake tears bhari.....

DIeting re...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Sangai gym jane bhaye bhana... afu ta sajha ko 7 baje dekhi 9 samma... hanumaan ko bhakta banincha... tanna khane ani majja le hanumaan bhakta bhanne:)

Good thing timile haat le puchi sakyou... natra timro pabitra asu jharera yoo dharti banjaar hunthio........;)

La aba Ice cream khauuuuuuuuuuuuu yo pani Vanilla flavor... ko..Hyaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Fat free ho ke :P. hehehe ;)

IndisGusie:)