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Riten
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Posted on 05-04-07 3:26
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Posted on 05-04-07 5:47
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good one galt!! I don't know whether this is your fiction or reality based, it touches hearts of people who have gone thru similar experience in real life. I had a similar kind of sister who used to call me 'dai' suddenly disappeared without notice when the proper time came. Damn puberty!! :-) p.s. I hope it will not be tragedy like yours.
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Posted on 05-04-07 6:07
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john, great.......keep writing
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Posted on 05-04-07 6:12
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Good lord. God save you John. You're drowning in the very lake of creativity you've built. Amazing piece!! WAH!!!!!
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Tamang Lady
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Posted on 05-04-07 9:03
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.Deeply touched! Thank you John .
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MazeMyan
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Posted on 05-04-07 9:52
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John: Great as usual. You left me almost in tears not because of what you wrote, but because of what you did not write and left for my imagination. I am not sure if you meant us to imagine what I did. Perhaps you meant to give us the freedom and the chains as well, as writers usually do. Your amazing style aside, this write-up rekindled my gratefulness for groups like Maiti Nepal. Thanks again.
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Posted on 05-04-07 10:11
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gr8 as always. running out of words to laude awesome writes and authors
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Posted on 05-04-07 10:11
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Great! I am in awe of your writing. Keep up the good work.
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lootekukur
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Posted on 05-05-07 12:10
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some relationships don't crave for a mere title or a social recognition, yet they become more than just a mere relationship. i could totally connect to what you went through while you're dispensing the ashes of the deceased one who you failed to rescue.
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shakshi
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Posted on 05-05-07 11:43
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the story brought me to tears...the reality is so close to home.... some scars never fade some hearts never mend you try so hard to make it right but as time slips through your fingers all you can do is sit on a river bank and wish that the smoke of your cigarrette would take you back xxx
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Posted on 05-05-07 12:29
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Posted on 05-05-07 3:18
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NICE ONE dem smooth n carved with the heavenly words loping it myan....... I consider you as FIT n FINE too LOL.... nice weeken.....
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Captain Haddock
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Posted on 05-06-07 9:27
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Finally got to read it. I must say it is a very well written piece. The title, plot and ending all come together very well. Liked the style, tone and tenor you used in the story. Best wishes.
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Posted on 05-06-07 1:33
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John, You report the crime on your own court and you sentence yourself to the pang of remorse to suffer all your life. What imperfection would it bring to her creation if she grants foresight to the good souls ? Is it lot to ask? Bless you.
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Posted on 05-06-07 8:45
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John, Nice story! awesome narration!
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meera
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Posted on 05-08-07 7:18
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John, sad ain't it? But then we humans are never perfect.
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Posted on 05-08-07 8:18
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very nice. These days whenever I check sajha I look for your piece. Great work keep writing.
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timetraveller
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Posted on 05-08-07 8:22
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On an even bigger picture....I think it's awesome that us Nepalis have some within our circle who have such amazing skills. There's you john and Sum Off with exceptional writing skills. Then there's a financial post started by Eminitrader- a guy with brilliant trading skills and I'm a regular contributor to his thread. And I'm sure there are others involved in other fields who have a lot of contribution to make. I wish our leaders back home saw this. Maybe they'd feel ashamed at not building the proper infrastructure to lure budding talent to help the dormant, yet even more powerful force- which is sadly currently ploughing and fetching water all day long. Keep it up John. Every time I read your stories, the more I learn about human nature. Thank You!
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Posted on 05-08-07 8:38
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Good one!! I really enjoyed reading it.. Ohh Poor Maya!!:-(
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Posted on 05-08-07 9:26
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. Emotive words coalesced into an unfortunate turn of events in the story. Couldnt be any better than this, Galt!
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Bhangli Damini
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Posted on 05-08-07 10:10
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Jhon Galt, I would say - Sir- John . Wau ! you could be the inspirations of those writers who inspires others. You deserve a - salute- We will be enjoying your future creation - article or the stories. -BD
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