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newuser
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Posted on 07-04-05 5:03
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Intriguing disconnection An enchanting repartee Between you and me Was stopping the ticking clock And calming my living block Utter silence and tranquillity around Simply the echoes of a soothing sound Came from the wires as we proceeded And my heart only conceded To the sweetness of a nightingale tone As if there was no tomorrow to come As if my metabolism needed no rest I was in a mood to wait and wait To listen the sound waves from wires That struck and echoed in my ears Flap! All of a sudden And to my unfathomable surprise Abruptly the line demised Dead silence ruled as it disconnected Without any warning Without any reasoning Leaving me in melancholy And pensiveness I am awestruck in kind of despair Was it a technical monster? Or some monstrous thoughts overpowered us to you, me or to both? Hope the clock ticks quickly to the dawn And let me know what the reason was Or the wires may not be reconnected again.
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Ok
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Posted on 07-04-05 6:31
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Newuser, I have a BIG problem. Could you please suggest me what I should do? I know the meaning of each WORD. Even if I do not, I can see in the dictionary. BUT, The PROBLEM is: I can not understand the meaning of the SONGS and POEMS written in ENGLISH. This rule does not apply in case of STORIES. What is lacking on me? ---- OK
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 07-04-05 7:07
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>the wires may not be reconnected again. Newuser, Hope the wires will be reconnected again after "THE LOST KEY" being found. Good job bro! Hope more from you.
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newuser
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Posted on 07-05-05 12:45
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ओकेजी साँच्चै नवुझ्या हो ? कुरा के भने कविताको पात्र, मानौं X कसैसंग टलिफोनमा रमाइलो कुराकानी गरिराथ्यो। अचानक लाइन काट्टियो अनि उसलाई नरमाइलो लाग्यो। किन अनायाश यस्तो भयो ? कवितामा उसले सोधिरहेको छ। फेरी पढ्नुस त अव वुझिन्छ। दादा धन्यवाद। चावीको कथा त उहिल्यै सकियो, हैन र ?
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MatrixRose
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Posted on 07-05-05 3:19
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The Reason: Too many times has a death message Come late at night For me not to fill with fear When the telephone pulls me awake. And when I hear the voice I know the news is bad. He asks me why do I think so And I say the battery is dead. :d We talk a long time Even with the peeps on our ears Everything was uncertain Not knowing when the Dead silence would take place. Then all of a sudden There is a silence on the end of the phone, Grief, loss, disconnection, And yet something else, Something like rejection. The phone fills with silence. There is nothing left to say Except to wait for the other day.
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SITARA
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Posted on 07-05-05 2:39
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Ah! but, Would you change your perception, Toss out every uncertainty, Tear up your calling cards, If I told you... I feel close vibes in the very ether that connects the distance which separates us!? :)
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Ashley
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Posted on 07-05-05 3:34
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Phone Buzzes, heart Jigs I turned anemic on the phone The hit of coins in the telephone box The Moment! The Words! Hushed hearsay to swap Couldn't You Say to The wishes were whispers And they didn't go through Two psyches murmur in the same idiom And talk of many things, formless. Nothing righteous can come from it but pigeons have germs..... Ashley!
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perplexed
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Posted on 07-05-05 11:37
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WET IN LOVE! A rain drop, ?plup?. Then another drop, ?plup?. My blind eyes catches the plup. And the wind sings, They come! They come! Trashing, Rushing they come! So I fly, inside the nucleus of a universe. Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup Thousands of Plups. She hits me, all over ( from my head to my toe) I am wet, Wet in love.! I gallop like a horse, only without a forward move I land, A BIG BANG!! Diamonds scatter! Life begins! In a sudden cosmos dampens, But the drop still plups I so am still wet, Wet in love! Ashley, a very nice creation. Formless talks, abstract talks, she moves, I hate, He said, but pigeon have germs ? A telephone talk. Enjoyed the short piece, thax. OK, A life is a life, need for its understanding isnt obvious. Similar is with poems. A poem is like a rubber, it should bend, strech, the WAY YOU WANT, but dont dare to go far, it will break, you loose the meaning. Do not worry about silly words, such as: Creativity and Imagination, they are for poets, to claim themselves. Reading a poem should be as easy as ridding a RoLLer Coaster, you heart should beat with some different beats than usual, it should give you thrills and chills like bungy jumping. :)
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perplexed
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Posted on 07-05-05 11:46
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hyaa, lekhchu lekchu bhanda bhandai kyaa birseko... hey Sitara ;)
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newuser
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Posted on 07-06-05 3:14
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Matrixrose, that was so sweet. ;> the following day, the sun may rise but by then, the full moon dies Sitara, oh my joys! I claim that I am one of your greatest fans. Kina sustataauno bhayo aaja bholi? sajha khallo laging these days :) I am yet to enlighten to change my perception Ashley, seems you have been enjoying many dances since you requested to save the last one. I was 'khangranga' when two psyches murmered but pigeons have germs, You are right! Perplexed, Fantasy is the sweetest ambrosia, isn't it? Yeh, if poems had any rules and poets had any boundry, there would have been very few poems and I would never have been a 'poet'. Keep coming guys. Kamsekam lekhna janne haru le dui char tukra lekhde hamlai inspiration milthyo ni.
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MatrixRose
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Posted on 07-06-05 3:31
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Matrixrose, that was so sweet. ;> the following day, the sun may rise but by then, the full moon dies ....................................................................................................... Did I ever care?
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newuser
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Posted on 07-06-05 4:01
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Did I ever care? Oh sweetheart! I know you cared. :)
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newuser
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Posted on 07-22-05 3:45
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Angelic Love Baby, As I am gazing at, Your alluring eyes Your beautiful lips Your blushy cheeks Your crisp nose Your charming teeth Your cute smile Your inviting stare Your angelic face, I found ocean I found moon I found dream I found spring I found light I found delight I found fire I found desire And, what not? I found LOVE. -newuser
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 07-22-05 9:50
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Posted on 07-25-05 7:57
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tringgggg tringggg............ हलो! को बोल्?नुभाको? नमस्?ते! म ओके बोलेको अमेरिकाबाट। त्?यहा मन्?जु छ। ए! मन्?जुलाई खोज्?नुभएको? एकैछिन है। मन्?जु! ए मन्?जु! अमेरिकाबाट ओकेनानीको फोन आछ। झट्? आइज, झट्। ( मन्?जुलाई कुर्?दा कुर्?दै फोन काटिन्?छ र ओके माथीको कबिता सम्?झन्?छ.....)
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Ok
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Posted on 07-25-05 8:21
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U_day Jee, Haha A very NICE example to make Newuser's difficult (for me) poem easy to understand. I say it may happen, but you see ---. You know what is inside the dash-dash. Cheers! ---- OK
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